Hey!!!

Hey ya!!!!
I worked some on my story yesterday; the one which is called "story about musician" (which is what it is saved as!!!)
This story is about a out-of-work musician, Richard, who finds work as the lead in a musical. Richard, who lives with his younger sister in their aunt and uncle's house, and Richard and his sister long to find a life of their own, in their own house. They promise to adopt Oliver, a dog at the local pound, whom Leah gets to know and love during her volunteer work at the pound. Meanwhile, Richard's Uncle Ian and Aunt Jill...well, they're the sort of people who seem like they don't have enough things to do in their lives, and don't seem to care or realize it. Meanwhile, Richard finds himself going to a flurry of rehearsals, and meeting with people like stern Mr. Leonard, the director, Sonya, one of the other actresses, who wants to be a pediatrician, Brandon, a stuck-up actor who dislikes Richard, and Polly, whom Richard finds a special friendship with. (copyright 2010, Katy Allie)
As all other first drafts, this one will need a lot of of work when it is finished. So here's my summary of my story, which will obviously need a better title when finished.